Baywalk Breeze (Short Story)
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August
24, 2005, Ninoy Aquino International Airport
“Three years after, I
thought I would be happy. It seems nothing changed after three years of living
in the United States. Three years of busy monotonous life, “Adrian said to
himself upon his arrival in Ninoy Aquino International Airport.
Carrying his baggage full of
his personal belongings and “pasalubongs” for his relatives Adrian Palacios, a
twenty-six years old nurse was a picture of triumph and courage in his
homecoming in the Philippines after his contract as a nurse in urban hospital
in Texas for three years expired. With his favorite book entitled A Man
Named Dave: A Story Of Triumph and Forgiveness by Dave Pelzer in his left
hand, Adrian walked into the baggage area to get his things and walked through
the lobby of the airport towards the gate. To the opposite the road where
relatives of the passengers wait, Adrian's attention was diverted. He saw
parents embracing their son who have just come to the Philippines after several
years of working abroad. Some of the relatives in that area were very excited
and happy upon seeing their relatives who worked to earn a living in foreign
lands. But in his case, no one was there to meet him even his parents and
siblings.
“Mama and Dada may be very
busy now in the fields that they found no time to meet me. Well, it doesn't
necessarily mean that Mama and Dada don't care about me just because they
failed to meet me in the airport, “he sighed. “Well it’s okay! Mama and Dada
are also practical because in the first place it’s a waste of money because I
could still see them when I come back to Hinatuan.”
Even he consoled himself in
saying those words to himself, his face still can't hide the disappointment he
felt at that time. He just ignored the scenes opposite the road and called for
a taxi.
Not so long a taxi approached
him and there he went inside. While the taxi was traversing the busy streets of
Metro Manila, Adrian’s eyes were overwhelmed by the various scenes he saw from
the moving taxi.
“Mmmm..the Philippines before I left was still the Philippines now. There were no major improvement at all. Poverty still exist and because of that I can't blame myself why I worked abroad to earn dollars.” Yet upon his realization, he still can't hide from his eyes the sadness and longing he felt when he tried to reminisce what had happened in the past... three years ago. His words were ironic from what his heart was telling him to say.
“Mmmm..the Philippines before I left was still the Philippines now. There were no major improvement at all. Poverty still exist and because of that I can't blame myself why I worked abroad to earn dollars.” Yet upon his realization, he still can't hide from his eyes the sadness and longing he felt when he tried to reminisce what had happened in the past... three years ago. His words were ironic from what his heart was telling him to say.
“Manong, Baywalk!” “Yes,
sir!” “ Baywalk... Three years ago..” He kept quiet. “Sir, Baywalk today is
different from the Baywalk three years ago. Mayor of Manila made great
improvements in infrastructures especially in tourist spots like Baywalk. Sir
you would surely love the place!”the taxi driver said. “Is that so? Good!” He
kept quiet and continued to look at the streets of Manila as if he is expecting
to see someone in one of the streets they could pass by.
“ Three years ago.. the
sunset.. I can still remember.. Oh Lenny!”
* * * * *
August 22, 2002, Baywalk,
Manila
“Oh! please don't leave me.
Why would you go to the United States and leave me yet you say you love me?”
“Lenny, please understand
me. Let's grow up in our decisions! Dreams and love are not into different
worlds they can go together but please understand I have to go to the United
States to pursue my dreams for my family.”
“ How about our dreams! You
said I am your everything.” “ Oh, Yes! You are my everything but tomorrow is
uncertain we have to build it to overcome future hardships. I can't just
sacrifice my family for you. I love you yet I have to leave you!” He kept
quiet.
The sunset creates a gloomy
atmosphere between Adrian and Lenny. The gap between them seems too far for
them as the feeling of longing starts to separate them.
Lenny cries. “ I really
can't understand why you want to leave me. Please don't leave me!” Lenny tries
to hold Adrian's hands yet Adrian seems to very decided on that matter.
“ I love you Lenny but for
now I'll leave you. When I come back, I hope you'll still there for me. I hope
you would wait for me. After my contract expires three years from now-August
23, 2005, I will come back and we will be together again. I will be waiting in
this place.”
“ Adrian, I can't promise
you anything. Time changes everything. I can't promise I won't change yet
forever a part of me is you. That will be permanent that even time can't
change!”
“ I love you Lenny and that
also permanent. I'll be loyal to you. The sun, the sea breeze and the birds
here in Baywalk will stand as witnesses of our love. I love you and I hope you
will wait for me!”
They kiss.
Adrian left. Lenny cries as
she faces the decending light and the surrounding is filled with darkness. His
heart was filled with gloom and uncertainty.
* * * * *
August 24, 2005, Baywalk,
Manila
“Thank you Manong. Here's my
fare!”
“ Oh, this is excessive!”
“ Keep the change Manong.”
Adrian looked at the new
lights of Baywalk. The colorful lights, the various stalls, the busy merchants
and the straddling tourists.
“Baywalk has really changed
a lot like what Manong have said. This is much beautiful than what it has been
three years ago.”
He marveled and was lured by
the beauty of the new Baywalk. The breeze of Baywalk was still the same but
unlike three years ago, the breeze now is towards Baywalk... his homecoming.
Adrian sat in one of the benches in the Baywalk. Since he was very tired and
hungry, he bought lumpia and a bottle of Coca Cola as his merreinda in one of
the stalls. He really enjoyed his merrienda since it was three years ago his
usual merrienda especially in most of his dates with Lenny.
“ Lumpia and Coca Cola...
three years ago.. Lenny and I... my favorite!”
After his merrienda, he
browsed the pages of his favorite book, A Man Named Dave: A Story Of Triumph
and Forgiveness by Dave Pelzer. He enjoyed reading it. It was story of Dave
who like Adrian who went a lot of difficulties in Texas as a registered nurse
yet those trials made him even a better person.
“This book is so amazing. I
don't know how Dave can forgive the abuse he suffered as a child. He had the
spunk and determination to turn his life into good by helping others. In my
eyes he is a hero,”Adrian commented.
After awhile, someone patted
his shoulders. He was ofcourse very excited to know when someone was at his
back. He suspected it to be Lenny. “Oh, Lenny! Its you!” However when he turned
back he was disappointed when he saw a girl dressed in white bringing a bundle
of red roses and leis of sampaguita.
“Sir, sampaguita.” “ Oh.
Take this five hundred pesos I will take all roses and leis.”
“Thank you sir.”
“ I thought it was Lenny,”
Adrian told himself.
After the sampaguita vendor
left, he continued reading and brought out a pen from his pocket and wrote this
words at the back of the book he is holding:
August 24, 2005
Adrian.. Adrian.. three
years ago you left Lenny and prioritized your dreams and your family. You said
Lenny she was your everything but what have you done. You arrived one day late
from what you have promised and now you don't know where is Lenny. You don't
even cared to call or write her for the past three years until you were then
dubious on her love to you. Now the future is really uncertain.. you don’t know
if she had changed like Baywalk or if she waited for you for the past three
years like what you did.
After writing, Adrian was
vey restless and was starting to be impatient yet he kept on waiting and
waiting and waiting until midnight came. For several hours, he made himself
busy to get rid of his impatience.
And finally, he became tired
and hopeless. He decided to call for a taxi towards Manila Domestic Airport for
Davao City to visit some of his friends in College before talking a long and
difficult road towards the remote town og Hinatuan, Surigao del Sur where he
studied his elementary and secondary studies.
He languidly took his steps
towards the highway across Baywlk to call taxi. With each step he remembered
the days when he and Lenny met as professional and registered nurses at the
Philippine General Hospital in Manila. But since Adrian's family is not
financially able to meet all their needs, he decided to work in Texas to
earn more. Lenny objected his plan but Adrian saw the need to pursue his dreams
for his family, he left Lenny. Adrian even tried to convince Lenny to go with
him in the United States if they would get marry but Lenny objected since he
don't want to build a family in foreign land believing that her children might
forget the values of a Filipino which Lenny values a lot. Lenny since she came
from a rich family doesn't need to go abroad to earn a living and that there is
no reason at all that she would leave for abroad.
He still waiting foir Lenny
to come. “I know she never forgot that after three years.. that was exactly
August 23, 2002.. and now its August 24, 2005.. three years.”
Because Adrian knew that the
Eastern hemisphere where the Philippines is located is ahead by one day from
the Western hemisphere, he tried to depart Texas on August 22, 2005( United
States time) so that would arrive in the Philippines on August 23, 2005, the
date he promised Lenny. Unfortunately he got sick two days before his departure
he was not able to get a plane ticket via Manila.. a mistake that he really
regretted.
“ I am suppose to arrive
August 23 but my stupid body thwarted me to do so. Now, lenny won't come. I
broke my promise but how would she know I returned if I already hurt her by
breaking my promise.”
Before he went near the
highway to get for a taxi, he left the book he was holding since he arrived. It
was given by Lenny before he went abroad on the day they said their promises to
each other. In one of the benches, the book was left. The book for Adrian was a
sign of his fidelity towards Lenny and that she returned to fulfill his promise
to her. He hoped that even with a very little possibility, Lenny would be able
to get the book and know that he returned.
Though hesitant, Adrian
called a taxi. After a few minutes, a taxi nearing him. “Para!” The taxi
stopped infront of him. He noticed that someone is inside the taxi. “It's a
girl dressed in white.” He thought it was a prostitute he could not find any
reason why a girl dressed in white would go to Baywalk on midnight. “ I was
wrong. Baywalk is still a place for prostitutes,”he said.
For the second time he was
wrong.. he saw a decent woman dressed in white... a white dress very familiar
to her. “ Oh she's a nurse!... and what would a nurse do in Baywalk at
midnight. Care for sick people!?” he laughed at himself.
Time was too fast that he
never noiticed he was looking at the girl he wanted to see. The woman was still
as beautiful three years ago. Nothing changed in her appearance. “ It is
Lenny!” he exclaimed. With hair properly fixed and body still curved and face
still radiant, Adrian could not deny to himself that he was still in love with
Lenny after three long years.
There was a moment of
silence between them.
“ Sir, are you still coming
with me?” the taxi driver inquired to Adrian. “ No.. No.. thanks. Sorry manong!
I made a mistake. I'm still not going.” The taxi left Lenny and Adrian.
Adrian's eyes was fixed at Lenny's eyes.
Adrian could not come nearer
towards Lenny. He seemed shy and uneasy since for three years, Adrian had no
communication at all with Lenny. Adrian tried to come nearer towards Lenny but
Lenny ran towards the benches. Adrian followed her. And when Adrian was able to
hold Lenny's hands. Lenny tried to resist Adrian but Adrian embraced her. “ I
missed you so much!” Lenny cried.
“Why are you crying Lenny?
Isn't it we are suppose to be happy now?” “Wrong!? Don't you know that for the
past three years you were to unfair... You kept silent for three years. You
never called me neither you wrote to me to ask whether I am okay! I tried all
means to communicate with you but you never made a response!”
“ Oh Lenny! I am sorry.
Everytime you tried to call me, only God knows how difficult it is to ignore
you. I am hurt for three years of being away from you. I missed you so much.
Pain made me say nothing at all. I was mute for three years because if I still
made a tie between us during those times, it seems I was hurting myself more. I
believed that you deserve to be happy with someone else aside from me. I
thought three years would be enough for you to find another man you will truly
love and to gradually forget me. It's more unfair Lenny if I'll keep you on
waiting... I tried to forget you but I failed, “Adrian explained.
“ How dare you question my
fidelity! I was faithful for three years. I lived in your promises yet at the
end you broke your promise. Yesterday I was waiting for you all day but you
never came. You broke your promise!”
“No dear. I never broke my
promise. I returned for you. It's not important anymore whether I returned on
the 23rd or on the 24th. I returned because I love you.
The love that was three years ago was just a parcel of the growing love I have
now. I love you Lenny and that's what matters most.”
“Love.. how could you say
you loved me. You left me. I waited for you!
“I also waited for you. You
just don't know how I missed you. Everyday I kept of thinking of you. I thought
you would try to forget me that's why I also tried to forget you. Three years
it may enough for me to forget you but I can't,”Adrian said.
“You can't..?!” “ Yes I
can't because I still love you.”
* * * * *
The night passed and that
day ended for Adrian and Lenny with great memories. Since then, their love
never faded...
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Paul, this is wonderful. I think if you trim this down, rewrite the dialogues to give them more tautness in packing and sound landing then the intention and heart of the story will surface out more clearly.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mr. Julius Mendoza. I wrote this almost 9 years ago. I will try to rewrite this soon. Tusen takk from Norway.
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